Moment
It's August. I'm five-almost-six, and there.s still a few months until my
birthday. The important thing is that right now, I'm five, and not
four-almost-five like my brother, Kenny. Kenny won't be five until next
month, and we'll share October, until I turn six. But right now, in
this moment, I'm older. I'm out at the garage with my dad, because I'm
older, and I can count.
Paula and Leona are older than I am, but they're girls, which means
they don't count for days like this, when it's hot, and we're at the
garage, crawling around on the pavement surrounded by tools and greasy
sticky-black fossils of transportation. I'm crouched next to the Buick,
with my knees pulled up to my chest. The sun is beating down on us,
making it feel like my head is on fire. My jeans are warm, and they
feel soft and frayed at the bottom edge, but shorts are not okay to
wear to the garage.
It's humid, and my arms are shiny with sweat and a
little dirty from where I was laying on the ground until my dad said I
was getting in his way. The heat rises and shimmers above the asphalt
and the hood of the car, and it's easy to pretend that we're
underwater, and that Chicago has fallen into the lake like an inland
Atlantis. I feel like I'm breathing through a wet sock.
The tinny echo of a string of profanity hangs in the air like
persistent smoke, no longer audible and in another heartbeat even the
echo will be gone. My dad's hand is reaching out from under the the
car, and the lines of his palm are permanently dark with work and
grease. I look at his hand, and twitch a little as a gnat breezes past
my ear, blocking out his words. I rub the sensation away on my shoulder
and listen again as he reads off a number, nine-sixteenths.
The box of his tools sitting open next to me is my most favorite
thing in the whole world. The inside of it is soft foam, covering over
a hard plastic shell. Each socket has it's own place, and they all like
up like silver knuckles, from smallest to largest, with the handle the
magic wand that makes them all work. I love taking each one out, seeing
which ones fit the ends of my fingers, poking my thumb into the
three-eighths and feeling the teeth grip, and the wrench click. Seeing
which ones fit my pinkie, my toes, the tip of my nose, clicking the
wrench one way, and feeling it click me back when I turn it the other
way. They're the cleanest thing I can think of, even though my dad's
hands are always dirty, each cupped socket gleams, and they give off
their own little heat shimmers because they've been sitting out in the
sun. When I reach for one, I know it's going to burn my fingers, but
there's no option of not picking it up.
My dad snaps his fingers, and I feel my fingers glow like embers
when I touch the bit that reads nine-slash-sixteen, which means
nine-sixteenths. I was right, it is hot and burning my fingers. I brush
my thumb over the numbers and the slash, and the letters, and poke my
finger into the end of it before attaching it to the handle. My dad's
hand is made up of spiderweb black lines, from working at the factory,
and tooling around with the car, keeping it running with prayed out
curses and sweat. One of his fingernails is black where he slammed it
in the door last week. His knuckle is similarly wounded. He probably
needs a band-aid but he doesn't really notice that it's raw and red. It
looks like he sanded it off, but I don't think he cares.
I put the tool into his hand, and his black fingers fold around the
wand, and I think that for the rest of my life the word "Daddy" will
evoke an image of that hand, and the gnat, and the sockets, the smell
of asphalt and motor oil. When the most important thing was that I'm
five-almost-six, old enough to count, and not having to share my age or
my father with anyone else.
thoughts.
This was from a writing prompt, to write about a moment in time, using as much detail as possible. I chose the best memory
I have of being around my father.
The thing I would like to note, that most people don't notice, is that I was much more willing
to scald my hand on hot metal than to risk angering my father. That defines my childhood
pretty well, I think.
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